Essay topic:
Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The argument presented provides views on opposite spectrums of reasoning; narrowing the duties of corporations to profit making and promotion of environmental wellbeing. While each of the views are sufficiently adequate when considered, the responsibility of corporations should not be considered as all-or-null in these aspects. Although the main motive of any business corporation is to make profit, it is also in their best interest to consider the health and wellbeing of societies in which they operate, this closely aligns with my position.
Although promoting the wellbeing may not be strictly considered as a responsibility, corporations have a lot to gain when they take initiatives to participate in community development exercises. For one, it promotes the health of customers, healthy customers yields increases profits for the corporation. For example, studies in Nigeria show that Pharmacies that carries weekly community health outreaches where customers are tested for medical conditions such as Hypertension, diabetes, malaria and so on, tend to have a higher proportion of health customers and even more sales. This is analysed to be as a result of good public image they develop when they becaused considered as being health conscious.
On the other hand, while being conscious on promoting the wellbeing of their communities corporations should be mindful to not loose focus on the main goal of any corporation; which is to maximize profit by making “lots of money”. Corporations that have numerous investors on board not consider the effects of taking on such responsibility on their net income. For example a newly established textile factory which is situated on a poorly constructed road and tries to extensively repair the damaged road within its first month of operation before any income is made is at the risk of incurring losses and the expenses incurred is expected to be greater that any income to be made within the first moth of operation.
In conclusion, while environmental development and promotion is not neccessarily a reponsibilty as much as it is an advantage, these opposing views should be carefully considered and balanced to maximize the benefit of both views.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mple a newly established textile factory which is situated on a poorly constructe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 347.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37463976945 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17032746825 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533141210375 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9977567527 60.3974514979 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.545454545 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5454545455 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208290179318 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084399350726 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475923711796 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11674333176 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631285237849 0.0667264976115 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.