More robots are being used at home and work place. Do you think this is a negative or positive trend?
Nowadays, world’s full with modern technologies which give comfortable living to humans and robots are one of them. However, a majority of robots are use at home and offices to help humans. I think it is a bright side because robots are help people in households works to do quickly and useful in work places for preserving data and other works.
The main advantage of robots working at home is that in today’s era everyone is busy in their life to meet goals as well as they do more work to earn more money for their better future due to this human half shortage of time for domestic work, so, machines like vacuüm cleaner are beneficial to clean house within minutes. In addition to this, microwave, refrigerator and so on are useful to cook food faster and keep meals fresh for long time. In other words, mixer grander, air conditioner and etcetera have own benefits for masses. For example, a report by newspaper shows that majority of people in Canada use robots in their household works due to lack of timing.
The another major benefit of robots to help in offices, hospitals, restaurants and so on. The reason is that in office have large data which are not be easy for humans to keep stores in mind that is why computer is using to keep data as open it within seconds when they needs. Moreover, there are many advance machines which are being using in hospitals for treatment of various ailments as well as these machines easily find the disease of patients and helps doctors to work quickly. Apart from that, a different types of robots are use in various fields to help humans and give relaxation to them. For example, in Kolkata,in July 2019 a local restaurant is open where robots are using in forms of waiters to serve food to customers and there robots can easily do their tasks, all the customers happy with this services.
In conclusion, robots are the greatest invention of science which make by scientists for aid masses in their busy schedule in-house and work places and its better for humans to give relaxation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...in office have large data which are not be easy for humans to keep stores in mind ...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...ata as open it within seconds when they needs. Moreover, there are many advance machi...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'type'?
Suggestion: type
...k quickly. Apart from that, a different types of robots are use in various fields to ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...axation to them. For example, in Kolkata,in July 2019 a local restaurant is open wh...
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Line 5, column 808, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...eir tasks, all the customers happy with this services. In conclusion, robots are t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69722222222 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43545696272 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536111111111 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.5738473973 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.076923077 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284192612094 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10464647768 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734888184781 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181667298792 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689646797313 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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