Life experience of living overseas can cause communication issues, since it is often difficult to adapt in a new environment and culture. However, it also can be beneficial in various ways. This essay will discuss both sides of this view and give possible answer for this argument.
It can be clearly seen that living abroad has its drawbacks which can impact people social activities. To illustrate, it can exacerbate your confidence because of language barrier. Being restricted by your capacity of communicate with others is the beginning of losing yourself in another one's culture. Not only language barrier, also differences between other rules and ways to do something are observed from all countries and continents.Therefore, living abroad may can requires flexibility of characteristics and communication from you.
However, we can also can acquire more acceptable proficiency during the time in an another country. No one can deny that it is the perfect opportunity to improve skills as the environment itself helps you to learn their native language while you spending specific time of your life there. Besides, another benefits might be being introduced about others culture. In particular, you can easily go and have some experiences about that country's culture and even history as there are numerous museums are developed nowadays.Moreover, exchanging experiences with foreign people is the best chance to advertise your country's features and obtain from them about themselves too. Finally, I think it is the best approach to become independent and globalized person.
In conclusion, I strongly disagree with given statement, and suggest that incident in overseas has its own huge advantages which are so useful for all people's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43223443223 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08181627317 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.534057408 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.076923077 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205075794415 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656385508613 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574502320746 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103743579277 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690513018156 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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