Should Government spend more money in improving roads and highways or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation ? why ? Give reasons for your answers.
People have argued about how the government should utilise their budgets on transportation areas. Some people think that the government should spend more money on developing streets and highways, while others believe that improving public transportations is the most important one. The following essay will discuss in details about it, but I do believe that both aspects are important and should be proportionately improved.
On the one hand , governments required to take significant financial decisions for the betterment of concrete road system consequently living standard of people reach to high level . They can easily and quickly transport raw material . Secondly , improved road system also helps in increase the economy of a country . To exemplify , good transportation leads to import and export of products done without any difficulty . Hence nation monetary value establish a strong place among other countries .
On the other hand , governments need to also use money to enhance the conditions of public transport mode . It is inevitable for reduce roads accident . To illustrate , developing nations like India and Pakistan where road accidental death ratio is high , their governments need to spend money on roads improvements .
To recapitulate , I firmly believe that governments take wise decision and use public 's money for their comfort by using it in betterment of public transportation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1214.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69953051643 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10748012842 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643192488263 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2989164781 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384488969627 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123332225727 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103657281573 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220761068816 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886393492973 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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