Presently, the trend of online shopping is surprisingly increasing. A part of society anticipates that the outlets and shops would soon be closed in the near future owing to huge interest of public in online shopping. However, I do not agree with this notion as online shopping is associated with high chances of fraud and it does not allow the buyer to handle the clothes before purchasing.
To begin with, traditional mode of shopping does enable one to touch the articles, check out its fabric, consistency, and colours before buying it which is not the case with online shopping. One has to just see the outfit or any product and order it. So, the issues with the satisfaction of the customers are high. For instance, it was reported on the website of a famous brand that few of its articles were damaged when received. Hence, it can sometimes be wastage of money only. Moreover, the complex return policies are mere headache for people.
In addition to this, the paying methods can be troublesome. People who pay by credit cards can end up getting cheated. The fact that more money can be withdrawn from accounts can not be ignored. Therefore, its not wise to trust someone with your money who can easily cheat you. Many cases of people getting more money deducted from their accounts while doing online shopping were obsereved in Canada. Moreover, one cannot bargain in online shopping which usually happens in traditional shopping. As the rates are flexible, purchasers can argue with the retailers regarding decreasing the price when shopping in person. In this way, one can enjoy perks of getting extra things by saving money.
In conclusion, although online shopping can apparently save the money and time of one, getting undesirable item and loosing money from bank accounts are the facts which cannot be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... getting extra things by saving money. In conclusion, although online shopping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, hence, however, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51734579533 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.6916665822 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183821319411 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588811840398 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600505335412 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124294703263 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579736217473 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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