Today, the way we consider about employment is heavily influenced by people interests which became more desirable to be self employed than working as an employee. This essay will discuss proper reasons of this phenomenon and provide examples of drawbacks of it.
The world is more developed, more workplaces are increased their availability to take on a employee. Henceforth, basically, people have much more opportunities to find their ideal job. However, development of the world leads to more interests and desires of being self employed. It is undeniable that being your own boss is the large chance to achieve your lifetime dream and to be self constructed. Furthermore, working for a company can be somewhat stressful as people who work there are always succumbed by their workloads. Therefore,clerk is not a suitable job people who hate being instructed and told. So, it seems that people have more preferential about running their own business because modern people intend to become self determined, different from previous decades' people's preference to work for a company as well as they could.
Nevertheless, we must be perspective about our future life and achievements. There a numerous unescapable risks to overcome when you work for yourself. The most terrible thing is that you can ruin the results of your all efforts and labors within a few seconds' wrong decision. It is the main drawback of the individual's business. Also, it is influential for society as it cannot stand on lots of private occupations. There a team work and cooperation are needed to develop any country efficiently.
In conclusion, being a self employed can lead to a big lucrative benefits, whereas it also can lead to a collapse if it is badly managed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...increased their availability to take on a employee. Henceforth, basically, people...
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Line 3, column 537, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , clerk
... succumbed by their workloads. Therefore,clerk is not a suitable job people who hate b...
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Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'risk'?
Suggestion: risk
...ievements. There a numerous unescapable risks to overcome when you work for yourself....
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...lf employed can lead to a big lucrative benefits, whereas it also can lead to a collapse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12237762238 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97257296525 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0099969501 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368739499101 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105452766568 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920874351379 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206261571093 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780833400289 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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