In some areas of the US, a "curfew" is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this.
Restriction on movement for youngsters at some time of the night if they are not in the custody of a grown-up has become imperative in some parts of the US. In my opinion, this is a welcome development.
The increase in street robbery at night targeted especially at young adults has necessitated the move to keep teenagers in-doors if they are to in the company of adults. This is to protect them from possible attacks and possible initiation into groups that carry out such nefarious activities. It is hoped that such crimes will halt when perpetrators run out of victims. For instance the streets of New York has seen a reduction in adolescent centered street crimes since the introduction of the 9pm to 6am teenage sit at home order in the city.
Without doubt, some people will question the right of movement of young people with regards to this restriction of movement. Since there has been increasingly cases of manslaughter on the streets of major cities of the US after 9 pm , I believe if this new rule will safeguard the lives of young citizens of the state, then it is worthwhile. Without mincing words, the right to life far supersedes the right to movement. Moreover, the right to move about of the teenager is not denied, they can move around at anytime so far they have an adult with them at certain hours of the night. It is believed that the presence of a grown-up will go a long way in protecting them from dangers.
To conclude, the ban on movement of teenagers at certain hours of the night without an accompanying adult in some areas of the US will protect these youngsters from the increasing theft and killings witness in the streets at such time. In my opinion, this is a right step in the right direction. I believe this law should be extended to other areas to forestall such nocturnal attacks in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64220183486 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66380205516 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492354740061 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6904711008 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.428571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
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Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264065528393 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878216602245 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707645656494 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179607389322 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472285859134 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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