Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the Western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by the government and individuals?
In this fast-pace world people are moving from one country to another easily. Some people having a deep fear on foreigners that is called as Xenophobia mostly growing in western countries. It is not a disease and doesn’t need any treatment but need some psychological advice to the people those who are having this fear. I will explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
Now a days every country has develop their tourism by welcoming foreigner into their place to grow up their economy and studies for international students also increasing. But people living in some regional areas snub the foreigners like racism. Government should take necessary action towards it because the consequences are deplorable in future. However, government should conduct programs and create awareness about this issue.
Moreover, individuals also should aware about this. For instance, a Sentinent island is the one of the islands in Andaman Nicobar islands where one tourist from the US to visit this island. That island is occupied by myriad ethnic groups and that tourist was killed by them. So before you reach your destination you should know about the people already living in that place.
According to my glimpses, if anyone is affect by Xenophobia give some psychiatrist advises like don’t see a foreigner as a stranger or an alien they are also a human being and those people need world exposure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1207.87684729 98% => OK
No of words: 231.0 242.827586207 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14718614719 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69190285126 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632034632035 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6772780236 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4615384615 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.25397266985 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960292643869 0.242375264174 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334033669617 0.0925447433944 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416500482013 0.071462118173 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558852744804 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182469498009 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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