do you agree or disagree about with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Truth is the path way to relief and happiness. truth which is defined as saying things the way they are with out changing anything is essential in people's daily lives. For those who are in a relationship or people in different categories,truth pays an ultimate role. Personally I agree that truth is the most important to consider in a relationship between people.
First, truth acts as a bridge to trust. When two people are bond together, faithfulness with goes hand in hand with truth is essential in their journey. My personal experience can be a compelling example for this. When I was in high school I had a three friends. One them had one ineviatable attitude of displacing people properties without permission. one day, she did it to my other friend, and for the sake of our relationship,I concealed the truth. later on she tracked the information and the story become overt but it was told in another way. After the whole tragedy we told her the whole truth and she trusted as more because we did not mislead her as every on else was doing. Thus, truth in a relationship is crucial because it creates harmony and strong bond.
Second, considering truth in a relationship suppresses other unforeseen circumstance that migh be harmful if truth is not told. When peaple dim the truth a lot happens in the darkeness and some people become victims unintentionarly. For instance, I had a neighbour family whose father always lied her wife about him having affairs with other women. The day after he passed away, the family was left in deep troubles. The children from other wives came to seek for their inheritance. As result, conflicts unfolded and some of the family members lost thier lives due to long-term strife among the family and the children seeking for thier inheritance. thus if the father could have told they truth, the family could not have landed in such kind of tragedy. Truth pays an important role in avoiding problems that might strike after a lie.
To conclude, truth is important into people's daily lives because it conceals trust among them and helps them to fight against unforeseen circumstance that might occur if truth is not told.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, thus, as to, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86021505376 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71132369132 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540322580645 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0683465082 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1818181818 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 5.45110844103 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186804479203 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606496371121 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813445089112 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126234254408 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654073064503 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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