Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
The problem of enviroment pollution which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this nation. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effect of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one steam from the fact that is private transport which increase most pollution in the city ,for example auto ,and buses. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is traffic rule which people should not use, furthermore, needless to say , all these merits stand in a good stead.
however, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that deforestation and wastage of water. Besides, government should launch CNG cars and banned old model cars and it should also decrease environment pollution, hence , it is apparent why many are against this trend.
According to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to conclusion that the benefits of enviroment pollution are instrumental indeed, nevertheless, its petionial drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 229.0 242.827586207 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43668122271 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79640276842 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 139.433497537 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624454148472 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.1754229491 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 7.25397266985 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783322232266 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0350382883708 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347206271705 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0542473905763 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325241243483 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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