Environment pollution is too alarming to be managed by individuals. Real change can be made at the government level. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Environment pollution plays major role in causing various health harzdous in each individuals health. Pollution includes sound pollution, air pollution, water pollution, etc. Noise pollution includes loud horns, speakers, etc. Air pollution includes smoke from vehicles, factories, and also house hold chores. Water pollution is caused by mixing factory waste, drainage, etc in sea or river.
It is each individual's responsibility to take care of the environment. If each individual contribute in controlling the environment pollution, it can be easily avoided. As a Citizen of the country, we are responsible for our environment. If we take care of the environment , it will take care of our nextgeneration in future.
Government should take a strict action againt each individual who corrupt the environment. They should bring a strict law's for punishing the people who corrupt the environment. It is not only government responsibility to look after the environment pollution. Government should bring the alternate method to dispose the waste, so that people will follow it.
I strongly disagree that Real changes can be made at the government level only. Each individual should take responsibility and co-operate with the government to control the environment pollution. With the help of government we can control the pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...causing various health harzdous in each individuals health. Pollution includes sound pollut...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...e, etc in sea or river. It is each individuals responsibility to take care of the envi...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ment. If we take care of the environment , it will take care of our nextgeneration...
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Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...it will take care of our nextgeneration in future. Government should take a strict a...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'law'?
Suggestion: law
...environment. They should bring a strict laws for punishing the people who corrupt th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 31.9359605911 63% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 5.75862068966 486% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63054187192 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21680321946 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 139.433497537 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536945812808 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.5024630542 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.8802894731 50.4703680194 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4375 104.977214359 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6875 20.9669160288 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.4375 7.25397266985 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188977019093 0.242375264174 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728210298475 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111563349108 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125695743607 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100981768827 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 10.9458128079 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.94827586207 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.3980295567 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.