Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
An effective leader is the one who is able to understand and solve the problems of the nation or infact, any group or community's crowd he/she represents. Afterall, it is the crowd who chose the person to be the leader and represent them. And for such a leader to effectively carryout his job, he needs to have a very good moral judgement and respect towards his colleagues.
For example, India's crowd as a nation chose narendra modi to be their prime minister as they believed he would address the nations problems and help solve them better than any of his peers or anyone from other parties. It's clearly evident that modi brought about a lot of changes to india as an economy and a nation because, India now is worldwide known for many things compared to 5-6 years ago because of the outreach modi has had towards the other nations. His moral judgement and friendliness have brought help to India from allover the world. Even after doing so many things, if he had just one bad quality of not showing respect to his peers, he would'nt be called as a good leader. Of course, respect works on a give and take policy. There is a limit up to which anyone can give respect without receiving any from the other side. For example, when the opposition party tries to ridicule him, he always gives it back.
One more example could be in an office scenario, a manager will only be an effective leader, if he thinks about the conditions of all the people working under him and then allot the work accordingly to reach the goal.His moral judgement is tested here,say an employee isn't well and he is ordered to finish the work at any cost, it clearly shows the manager lacks morality. Also,his behavior towards his peers is equally important. If he is very rude to his junior staff he wouldn't be called an effective leader by anyone.
Finally, an effective leader is the who stands in front and drives the people who chose him. For this to be possible he has to have moral judgement and respect towards his peers.
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- Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, finally, if, so, then, well, as to, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5595567867 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35011473434 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518005540166 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7962962135 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231244044158 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907711282523 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614360230096 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18416250346 0.150359130593 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519335273875 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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