In this question learners were asked to discuss why people travel more these days and to think about the benefits of travel.
Nowadays, Travelling has become the important part in our life. Most of people these days would like to travel in different places. A few decades ago, only the rich can afford to travel since they can spend more. This essay will discuss the reason for increase in travelling and the benefits of it.
To commence with, the first and foremost reason is the competition in transport industry. Long ago, there were few airlines companies so they control the prices of the tickets which used to be very high. But, this has been changed as there is a drop in the prices due to development of the new airlines which makes it affordable for a medium class family. Moreover, trips can be planned using internet these days. They can select the best route for them to decrease the cost and increase the stay time.
There are lot of benefits that a traveller can get through travelling. Initially, person can explore the new places all over the world. Secondly, they get to know about the various religions, customs and the culture followed at different places. Moreover, they get to eat the exotic foods. This new experience can give the new insight on traveller life and the environment. For instance, 3 months ago, I visited Jaisalmer, Ajmer and Jaipur with my friends on a one week trip. The travelling fares were quite affordable and after book the tickets, I then searched the accommodation for all places on internet. We really enjoyed the cultural program and sight seeing by guided tour over their.
To recapitulate the given points, that more people would like to travel because of the advantages and the life time experience they get. Furthermore, this trend will increase in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
... become the important part in our life. Most of people these days would like to travel in diff...
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Line 1, column 156, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ifferent places. A few decades ago, only the rich can afford to travel since they...
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Line 13, column 107, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...ravel because of the advantages and the life time experience they get. Furthermore, this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86896551724 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51422587448 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8463308468 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3157894737 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2631578947 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240068441077 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733083851578 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768681777957 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163244995256 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105445122985 0.056905535591 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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