Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
educational institutions play a crucial role in the child's future, from bringing out their capabilities to the betterness of the future. educational institutions goals are to foster children in a didactic approach, looking to nurture the child holistically. Children should choose the field in which they are more engaged, which content them, because of the possibility of them to proliferate more in that particular field. the educational institution should not encourage children to choose the career path which is lucrative instead should instill the field which is more becoming for them. I feel the children should liberally get engaged in a field they love the most rather than looking for job prospects.
Firstly If the children are brought up keeping lucrative jobs in the mind, then there are high chances they may get involved in a field, in which they are not up to the mark, If someone is excellent in art and the society or the institutions wants it to become a doctor keeping the future in mind. Then it might lead him to oblivion. For example, if the god of cricket Sachin Tendulkar an engineer as the demand of IT would go high. Then would the 21st century able to witness cricket like him.
Moreover, The demands are capricious it can get also get change in the Eleventh's hour. Thinking of becoming a doctor from childhood as the jobs would be appealing. and then after in future no one can give a guarantee of whether the field will flourish or not. The demand for a Civil engineer had increased during the beginning of the 21st century, slowly as the technology took a leap in advancement and the demand of an IT expert or special machine learning expert is at the pinnacle for now.
Although healthy jobs are required to earn to live a life one desire, every job is attractive in their own way, the profound knowledge and zeal to work in any field will not stop anyone to flourish. If one has a deep idea of that area then that job will surely help to earn money.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...field will not stop anyone to flourish. If one has a deep idea of that area then t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, then, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72857142857 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60578477348 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0033986079 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 23.4991977007 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53333333333 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262838148617 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781845293192 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892493979998 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132088147001 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110770539536 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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