Task 2: Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Zoos are common in cities and they reserve a diversity of creatures that exist in the world. Whilst many people argue that zoos is appropriate for fauna species storages, others especially environmentalists point out that this kind of reservation is immoral and should be replace. Both sides will be discussed in this essay.
Zoos are assessed as a brilliant way to preserve animals due to several reasons. Initially, animals in zoo are in control by government or zoo administration which means they can get medical treatment and be out of target of predators. So that rare animals can survive and breed, get out of extinct zone and the variety of biodiversity of our planet still remains. In addition, zoos are resembled as the laboratory where scientists and researchers can find out and study about many animals life (characteristic, feeding, breeding…). Studying about animals leads to breakthrough and fascinating technology, which plays a vital role in human life. Moreover, people will appreciate animals and have a concept of protecting them if they observe animals and receive their information from the zoos.
By contrast, zoos are rejected by many people because they contend that zoos take animal’s freedoms and use animals in form of creation in order to make an income. First of all, animals in zoos live in a limited place, which is considered as their prisons. They belong to the natural environment, not artificial nature, where it is covered by humans and visitors. Furthermore, living in the zoos is terrible because animals have no freedom but it must be survival to served the citizens. Finally, zoos experience a tremendous amount of tourists annual, and they display the animals in order to sell the tickets. Consequently, it is cruel since animals aim to served tourists and be a tool to make money while people just pay and enjoy, they ignore what is happening to the animals.
To summarize, zoos are the place for reserve and research animals. However, their drawbacks are outweigh the advantages, they are locked in cage and display. Personally, I tend to support the giant reservation such as national park, ocean institution... where tourists appear at the low frequent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 273, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'replaced'?
Suggestion: replaced
...of reservation is immoral and should be replace. Both sides will be discussed in this e...
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Line 3, column 483, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...chers can find out and study about many animals life characteristic, feeding, breeding…...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
...h animals. However, their drawbacks are outweigh the advantages, they are locked in cage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13573407202 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92245473994 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5280167752 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5789473684 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207761544022 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676091187254 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541009655688 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129022420983 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562147401301 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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