In some countries, a high proportion of criminal acts are committed by teenagers. Why has this happened? what can be done to deal with this?
teenagers play an important role in building the society. Nowadays, the crime rate among teenagers increased dramatically in many developing countries like india, china, and pakistan. Although, this tendency leads to negative results, the number of youngsters scarifying their life increasing regularly. I believe that this problem has certain causes and can be eradicated by taking certain measures.
To embark with developing countries like india, china, and pakistan are overpopulated. These countries are not able to provide basic amenities like food, shelter, education, and employment. most of the graduate students are unemployed due to their financial crisis most of the youngsters are robberies in banks, doing crimes. Secondly, parents should give the right guidance to the children and should motivate them with good habits. They should spend time with children and should say things in a good manner. if the society met with standard living then automatically country will start developing in other perspectives like GDP growth, literacy rate. For instance, if a child grows in a good environment with certain aims and motives will help him in succeeding in his career.
The possible solutions for the above problems are government or organizations should take up some initiations and must eradicate the literacy rate. The government should help teenagers who are not affordable to amenities like education, food, and medical facilities. if all the individuals in the society met with standard living this will evidence in building the growth of the country.
To recapitulate, the teenagers doing crimes because of their financial crisis but this problem can be solved by increasing their standard living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56439393939 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86170920804 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57196969697 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2736138207 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120821311167 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414180213864 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449792565512 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860261442769 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266505482465 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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