You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there.Write a letter to the tourist information office.In your letter:explain what you needsay when you plan to be thereask for information about pri

Dear Mr. Talit,

I am writing to you to request to arrange a holiday apartment in the city center of Singapore. I am arriving along with my family members of four and would like to stay there for over a week, from 18th September to 26th September 2019.

To explain in detail, as Singapore is a beautiful city, we are thinking to stay in the main road area where there is frequent availability of transportation facilities so that we could get to nearby places in no time. Moreover, I am looking forward to a double bedroom flat with a large kitchen, a hall, two bathrooms, and which is at an affordable price.

We are going to arrive on 18th September, at 9.30 AM to the Singapore International Airport from Indian Airlines. As soon as we reach there, we shall fresh up, and visit the local places until evening which is nearby to the airport area.

Moreover, as this is a family holiday, I would like to know the appropriate prices for the visit to famous and interesting places in Singapore. Also, please let me know the details of available apartments along with their per day cost including the tax. In addition, kindly include the cost of pick up and drop from the airport to the apartment as well.

I look forward to receiving your response at earliest.

Yours sincerely,
Diva Robertson

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69264069264 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68599980061 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593073593074 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.9748404066 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5454545455 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990185697418 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037910968197 0.0766984524023 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455166253053 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0490265616791 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363209003407 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.