Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
The argument here is about the inoculations are'nt to be routinely administered to all the people in areas where the disease is detected as there is a small possibility that might get a person die.As the argument is provided with many unproven evidences leaves us with many unanswered questions.
The first one is that argument states that many lives might be saved if inoculations are given to all people in areas.It weakens the argument as there is no enough numerical evidence of how many are saved by inoculations.If the argument is supported with the survey could make this argument.
The second is that the argument is not provided with the evidence that there is a small posssibility of a person dying if the inoculations are administered routinely.It weakens the argument because it is not supported with enough evidence.Evidence that has statistics of the dead people because of the inoculations might help the argument to strengthen.
The third one is that assuming of only one factor that inoculations are only responsible for the death of some people.Here there many be various reasons for the death of that people.There may be some situations where people side effects of the use of inoculations or the inoclutions are not well enough to save from the flu..It weakens because the argument concludes without any supported evidence.The facts about the intensity of the flu at different stages and the dosage of the inoculations must be provided to make the argument strengthen.
The main assumption the whole argument depends is that the cow flu can be saved by only the inoculations.Here the argument does't consider the other methods that can save from the cow flu.There may be many other treatments to cow flu,those are neglected in the argument which weakens it.The argument with the evidence of other treatments fail to treat cow flu if discovered otherwise with enough support that it saved the lifes of the people.
Hence with these assumptions and insufficent evidences makes the argument weak.So with the expound information like survey on the number of the people saved and number of them who are died will make the argument complete.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 372 350
No. of Characters: 1773 1500
No. of Different Words: 145 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.392 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.766 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.693 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 112 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 88 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 53.143 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 24.747 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.714 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.566 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.895 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.261 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...argument here is about the inoculations arent to be routinely administered to all the...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...possibility that might get a person die.As the argument is provided with many unpr...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...possibility that might get a person die.As the argument is provided with many unpr...
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Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: It
...ations are given to all people in areas.It weakens the argument as there is no eno...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: If
...e of how many are saved by inoculations.If the argument is supported with the surv...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e of how many are saved by inoculations.If the argument is supported with the surv...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the survey could make this argument. The second is that the argument is not p...
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Suggestion: It
...inoculations are administered routinely.It weakens the argument because it is not ...
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Line 5, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Evidence
...t is not supported with enough evidence.Evidence that has statistics of the dead people ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...ight help the argument to strengthen. The third one is that assuming of only o...
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Suggestion: Here
...esponsible for the death of some people.Here there many be various reasons for the d...
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Suggestion: There
...us reasons for the death of that people.There may be some situations where people sid...
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Line 7, column 326, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...are not well enough to save from the flu..It weakens because the argument conclude...
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Suggestion: It
...e not well enough to save from the flu..It weakens because the argument concludes ...
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Suggestion: The
...oncludes without any supported evidence.The facts about the intensity of the flu at...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ided to make the argument strengthen. The main assumption the whole argument d...
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Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Here
...u can be saved by only the inoculations.Here the argument doest consider the other m...
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Line 9, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: There
... methods that can save from the cow flu.There may be many other treatments to cow flu...
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Line 9, column 242, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , those
... may be many other treatments to cow flu,those are neglected in the argument which wea...
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Line 9, column 296, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: The
...lected in the argument which weakens it.The argument with the evidence of other tre...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hat it saved the lifes of the people. Hence with these assumptions and insuffi...
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Line 11, column 10, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ved the lifes of the people. Hence with these assumptions and insufficent ...
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Line 11, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...icent evidences makes the argument weak.So with the expound information like surve...
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Line 11, column 97, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...idences makes the argument weak.So with the expound information like survey on the number o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, second, so, then, third, well, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 55.5748502994 81% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 356.0 441.139720559 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07865168539 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.56307096286 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96540222223 2.78398813304 107% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 204.123752495 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.421348314607 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 590.4 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.8473053892 258% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.84009339 57.8364921388 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 301.333333333 119.503703932 252% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.3333333333 23.324526521 254% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.70786347227 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261450586108 0.218282227539 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16120145073 0.0743258471296 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761433839473 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16120145073 0.128457276422 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761433839473 0.0628817314937 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.2 14.3799401198 224% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 48.3550499002 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.197005988 225% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.32208582834 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 98.500998004 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 12.3882235529 242% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.1389221557 230% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.9071856287 252% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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