Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, more and more people opt to play sports to get fit. Whether playing team or individual sports more beneficial to people is a debatable issue. While some people believe that playing team sport gives more benefits rather than individual sports, others do not. This essay will discuss why playing individual sports could give people many benefits but why team sports are more beneficial.
On the one hand, those who believe that playing individual sports is more important argue that it would be more flexible to do. If they are playing individual sports, they need not wait for other people to have time for playing together. In other words, people could do sports activities directly once they are available for doing it. For instance, swimming, if someone has one hour for swimming, they could maximize the one hour they have productively without waiting for their friends. For this reason, there are some people thinking that playing individual sports is more beneficial compared to team sports.
Contrarily, other people argue that sports which are played in teams could give people benefit which they could not get from individual sports. These people think that playing group sports is not only giving people healthier bodies, but it could also be a great opportunity to having quality times with friends or relatives. They also believe that it could boost their team-work skills and eventually could improve their friendships. For instance, teammates of a company playing football together. They are not only able to improve their fitness, but this also could lead them to a better relationship and team-work abilities in their workplace. These reasons and example have bolstered the argument which is arguing that playing team sport is more beneficial to people.
In conclusion, it is a debatable issue of whether playing sports in teams more necessary or individual sports. This essay discussed why individual sports could be beneficial for people but why playing team sports is still superior. In my opinion, it is better for people to do team sports rather than individual sports.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19533527697 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46954092344 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425655976676 0.561755894193 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5304688766 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422175618263 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196934816353 0.084324248473 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125927942292 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321561488845 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085449838076 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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