Mahatma Gandhi, Father of india, was born on October, 2, 1969. He was a great national freedom fighter. His full name was Mohandas Karamchand Gandhi. The word “Mahatma” in Sanskrit means a person having great influence over community. Before Gandhiji came to India, the condition of india was not good. British ruled India for approximatley 150 yrs and after that india became independent on August,15, 1947. Gandhiji had a huge impact on the community world wide. He finished his study of LLB abroad and after returning home he saw poverty and the deteriorating condition of common people.
Many people like Shubhaschanra Bose, Bhagat Singh, Chandrashekhar Azad moreover Swami Vivekanand also inspired people about freedom but gandhi had a marvelous success. “simple living, high thinking” was the motto of his life. He choose the path of ‘Ahinsa’- non-violence. people called him ‘Bapu’. Salt movement and Swadeshi (preference to products produced within country) were few of the remarkable events in indian history. He inspired people to join the independence movement without causing any harm to anyone. At the end of 1946 the entire nation stood with him to fight for a nobel purpose.
Gandhiji lived his life with simplicity. This simplicity attracted people like Nelson Mandela. He was inspired by Gandhi’s thoughts and applied the same in his life as well as his country, Africa. Mandela helped Africa to take a breath of freedom. many people still follow not only Gandhiji’s thoughts but also his guidelines. Today movies like My name is gandhi, Munabhai MBBS are based on either his life or thoughts. Furthermore, one famous quote by him was, If someone slaps u on one cheek then u present him your other cheek. The person will feel ashamed and will surely improve in his life.
Last but not the least, his life was filled with morality, hard feelings against violence and sympathy for poor people therefore everyone from all over world bows before him. Nathuram Gondse shot him and at the end of his life, Gandhi asked to forgive Nathuram. In his honour, Indian government prints currency having his picture on it. Hence, proudly I can say there was no one like him in past, no one in the present and there is very less probability that we will have a Gandhi in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09895833333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90753313222 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0617143795 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5185185185 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2222222222 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2962962963 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076529575617 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.022848830474 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226207502156 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511007456405 0.150856017488 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0110150585006 0.0645574589148 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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