At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, it is undeniable fact that some countries are facing the higher number of young generations, while that of elderly people are less and less. It seems to me that this trend could bring numerous benefits as well as drawbacks, yet the former would be far more significant.
Regarding the advantages, the large number of young adults would spur the economy of a state. They tend to be more productive and creative compared to the elderly people, so that youngsters would run creative industries and companies leading to enlarge job opportunities for people. Take Gojek, well-know startup company in Indonesia, as an example. Nadiem Makarim, CEO Gojek, could enlarge job opportunities for some unemployment people in Indonesia, even the company has contributed huge tax income for the national’s expenditure. Moreover, it is widely known that most adolescents have critical and creative thinking, so it could bring benefit for political situation in a state. If there they are positioned in some important roles in government like as a minister or governor, they could give some breakthrough leading to a better environment to that area they are responsible for.
Turning to the drawbacks, it might be said that having a bigger population of youngsters could harm the national’s economy. Vast majority of youngsters are 23 until 30 years who are seeking some jobs. As a result, if there is inadequate number of job vacancy, it could raise the higher employment number at that country. Additionally, young adults tend to lack experience and have unstable emotional condition. Therefore, they might make some wrong decisions in their daily activity, and this definitely would worsen the political situation.
To sump up, even tough the large number of youngsters could bring disadvantages, they could give more significant contributions to a country, such as raising the economic growth and developing a good political system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ernor, they could give some breakthrough leading to a better environment to that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37785016287 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04130233433 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1654080233 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165239670777 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591682732119 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049466442743 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102646008997 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268341282286 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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