Penguins facts and changes
Emperor penguins are very unique species. according to passage they have specific social abilities and they are no endangered species. Lecture contradicts passage by saying that this is true according to situations of past but today new data negates the ponts made by author. To prove his own opinion speaker has given relevent point and examples.
Firstly, he points out that as per passage, penguins are monogamous and by using vocal typical frequency calling method, they call and identify their mate at breeding ground. However according to speaker Its true that they are monogamous and in reality they are serial monogamous for every breeding season. if they fail to locate their previous mate they choose another female. Additionally here are very less chances of finding same female for next mating season. chances are only 15%.
Secondly, he denies that validity of point made by author with regards to breeding ground. penguins choose same path every season to reach same rookery-the breeding ground. this will increase the number of penguins. males reach at breeding ground before females. this is quiet contrary. Research done by University of Mynisoda showed that 6 varies example are their where new rookery was choosed by them. Furthermore, they relocated colony.
Thirdly, speaker opposes author by saying that changed climatic conditions made them endangered species. if precautions weren’t taken then there are chances of 1/3 population decrease at the end of century.
Hence in conclusion, speaker lucidly negates the point with cogency. according to him, over time true facts were replaced by new one due to change in conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
Emperor penguins are very unique species. according to passage they have...
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Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...peror penguins are very unique species. according to passage they have specific social ab...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...l monogamous for every breeding season. if they fail to locate their previous mate...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l monogamous for every breeding season. if they fail to locate their previous mate...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...evious mate they choose another female. Additionally here are very less chances of finding s...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun chances is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ther female. Additionally here are very less chances of finding same female for next...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Chances
...ing same female for next mating season. chances are only 15%. Secondly, he denies ...
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Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Penguins
...author with regards to breeding ground. penguins choose same path every season to reach ...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...reach same rookery-the breeding ground. this will increase the number of penguins. m...
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Line 9, column 217, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Males
...s will increase the number of penguins. males reach at breeding ground before females...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...each at breeding ground before females. this is quiet contrary. Research done by Uni...
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Line 13, column 106, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...onditions made them endangered species. if precautions weren't taken then the...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...on decrease at the end of century. Hence in conclusion, speaker lucidly negates ...
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Line 17, column 70, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...lucidly negates the point with cogency. according to him, over time true facts were repla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1373.03311258 103% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3893129771 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52527575847 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 419.366225166 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5215131289 49.2860985944 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1 21.698381199 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55 7.06452816374 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117892561353 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0303608173008 0.0996497079465 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583418644412 0.0662205650399 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681105796728 0.162205337803 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473615643524 0.0443174109184 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.09 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.