You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:
-Describe what you left and where it happend.
-Why are these papers important?
-What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Sir,
This is Johnny and I used your one of Orange cab services, yesterday evening. However, after leaving the car I realised that I lost some important official documents. I have tried to contact your driver immediately but as he was already busy in dropping some other costumer and implied his incapability to deliver them to me. Please understand that those papers are very important to me as it contains all information about newly designed security Application. I am afraid without those documents i might lose my job. The driver who picked me from my office is Derry and his ID no as reflected in the message is DRY13.
Hence, I request you to kindly retrieve those documents to me by end of the day. For your recognisation the documents are placed in red coloured zip opening file which might be fallen down in back seat. Once you have those papers, kindly meet me near cafe which is near by railway station. I hope there is no need for police complaint as I believe you will arrange for safe return of the file. Let me know if I need to raise any special request on your website for lost or left items in your cab. Mail me if you need any further details for receiving the documents like identification card.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 498, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...on. I am afraid without those documents i might lose my job. The driver who picke...
^
Line 5, column 579, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...d me from my office is Derry and his ID no as reflected in the message is DRY13. ...
^^
Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...pers, kindly meet me near cafe which is near by railway station. I hope there is no nee...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57466063348 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55541158637 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4114748796 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.25 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137587369851 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512672500589 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357389815933 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100225852307 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193520668934 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.