You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:-Describe what you left and where it happend.-Why are these papers important?-What would you like the manager to do about it?

Essay topics:

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:
-Describe what you left and where it happend.
-Why are these papers important?
-What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle from your fleet on June 1st 2018, more specifically, from London Mayfair to Piccadilly station, starting around 4pm and finishing 20 minutes later.

Immediately after entering the taxi that afternoon I immediately started revising some very important documents containing confidential client data. I have strong reason to believe that I left there documents in the cab upon reaching the destination.

These papers are of enormous value because of the information contained, and if they fall into the wrong hands there could be profoundly serious implications for myself, and possibly your firm too. The documents concern an extremely sensitive governmental topic regarding national security, it is therefore of paramount importance they are found and returned to me as soon as possible.

As a result of this, I need your firm to check the security camera in the cab of the aforementioned date and time, and please send a copy to this email: sample@sample.com. In addition, I would be terribly grateful if you could forward the contact details of the driver as I would like to contact him before the situation spirals out of control.

Your assistance in this matter is of dire importance, furthermore I would like to be believe we can solve this between ourselves without the Police or MI5 interference.

Best regards,

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Average: 5.5 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in regards to a recent journey I made in a vehicle fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18777292576 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05939999026 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.0014403119 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.5 76.5299724578 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.625 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14658646796 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488415613807 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396286095359 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663985407884 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407451610198 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 8.37731958763 207% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 70.7449484536 61% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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