Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Some people hold the view that if there is an opportunity to get a secure job, we should not miss it. However, others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is essential to find an appropriate job that is compatible with our interests. In my point of view, the second belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint my reasons to support my opinion.
The first reason coming to my mind is that the job is one of the most important parts of our life since we spend a lot of time to work. So it is necessary to enjoy our work and its environment. The results of a study conducted in our country demonstrate that a high level of job satisfaction plays an important role in increasing the level of life satisfaction for individuals.
Most of the people believe that we should immediately accept a secure job offer. They mention that due to the fierce competition among human resources, it is becoming increasingly difficult for one to find a job. Although this point of view is somewhat true, people with this opinion should consider this fact that if there is no satisfaction in a job for a person, he/she cannot continue it and it may lead to being frustrated. In my own experience, when I pursued my master's degree, I have to find a job to cover my living expenses. Hence, I accepted the first job offer and I began to work in a part-time job at a research center as a researcher. After a while, I felt that I did not like the job environment there and so I decided to leave that job. My parents were worried about this issue that I remain unemployment for a long time and therefore they convinced me to continue the same work. After some years, I could not endure doing that job and finally, I abandoned it while my time and energy were wasted during this period.
From what has been discussed above, I strongly believe that it is not necessary to ruin our chances of finding a satisfying job by locking ourselves in a secure job and we should attempt to find a job that matches our interests and goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48793565684 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6621565432 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495978552279 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.825277375 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3125 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247067734075 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868004649448 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618899157749 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146753757471 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058707060602 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 58.1214874552 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.