The bar chart shows the results of a survey which asked people the causes of crime
The given bar chart provides the information about the primary causes of law-breaking activities according to the survey participants. As illustrated by the chart, the largest number of respondents indicated that family upbringing was the main source of crime while the bottom of the list witnessed the presence of poor housing.
It is apparent from the chart that there existed two family-related factors. Childrearing, which was believed to have led to illegal activities by roughly 98% of those surveyed, was the first one. In comparison, just 37% of poll sample opined that the increasing rate of violation was attributed to parents busy working.
With regard to the authority’s duties, approximately 80% of individuals completing the survey considered lack of discipline at school environment to be the primary reason for law-defending activities as opposed to lower figures for the state of poverty and joblessness, at around 65% and 60% respectively. Meanwhile, under 30% of the respondents indicated that the other factors, including poor housing, lack of education and facilities were the major causes of illegality.
Boredom, drug addiction as well as peer group pressure were quoted as personal reasons in the survey. 70% of those involved selected peer group pressure as the main causes whereas that of drug addiction was just slightly over 40%. In comparison, roughly 30% of the individuals indicated that boredom usually compelled people to take law-breaking actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...son, just 37% of poll sample opined that the increasing rate of violation was att...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53043478261 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13810654144 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1759599845 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.2 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161206400991 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588068740167 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528347304996 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917832323605 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624817087831 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.