Some nations perceive that traditional medication has been popular since a very long time. Doctors who practice traditional medication, they claim that it works effectively than modern way of medication. I completely agree with this point of view as well as my position will be explained further.
Nowadays, Traditional medication is the purest form of remedy to any disease and has been popular since a very long time and many doctors suggest it as the best form of cure any kind of disease. As according to a survey in comparison to the modern-day medicine that is termed as the allopathy, the ancient methods are considered the remedies with a zero side effects. With this zero-side effect, the sustainability of the medicines becomes the longest and the patient can have a zero percent chances of its effects than its cure.
Moreover, the traditional techniques of medical science such as acupuncture and herbal treatment are the remedies that can be used for backaches, allergies, and viruses respectively. Also, Patients give a positive response to these treatments. In result, they feel a lot relief form their respective health issues and hence getting a permanent solution to their illness. But when look out for the modern-day medicines, they may have unknown effects. Which may shorter the lifespan of people.
In order to conclude, the traditional methods of medications are more preferable than modern methods. my reasons that traditional techniques have no side-effect as well as its give a permanent solutions to health related issues are logically acceptable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94283042363 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7530336325 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248910289297 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781536178881 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520627509746 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148864031398 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562482140831 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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