Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are many threats which are influencing our environment in a negative way. However, some people may argue that the main issue right now is the extinction of specific kinds of animals and plants. On the other hand, other people believe that there are more important issues related to the environment that we should be concerned about.
Without a doubt, a variety of different species is necessary for the ecosystem. Imagine if a certain plant will not grow anymore, then all of the animals which feed on this specific plant will lose their source of food. Result in, extinction of that animal as well, and this chain would go on. Also, we humans are getting our food from these animals and plants, so keeping these species alive is crucial for surviving.
However, there are issues that are more critical that need more attention than looking after endangered species. First, with the increase in factories and cars, we are moving closer and closer to global warming. Needless to say, if we do not prevent the factories from the emission of toxic fumes, we will not only face the increase in temperature, but also this would affect animals and plants negatively. Also, there exist some specific kinds of animals and plants which can not survive in a natural way. As a result, keeping them alive requires a massive amount of energy and money which could be expended on a more important cause.
In conclusion, there should be a balance between the importance of an issue with the amount of effort that has been put into it. Wasting money on projects such as keeping an animal alive, which might be impossible, is not a good idea. However, spending this money on a more serious issue could be more helpful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...s which are influencing our environment in a negative way. However, some people may argue that th...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rtain plant will not grow anymore, then all of the animals which feed on this specific pla...
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Line 9, column 491, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a natural way" with adverb for "natural"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nimals and plants which can not survive in a natural way. As a result, keeping them alive requir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83445945946 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39366392979 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533783783784 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8861709436 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139111290661 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464937369554 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339318718899 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.087273812163 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360571774298 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.