Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Studying History in school might become a dull task. Nevertheless, there are reasons why we are learning about the past; such as not repeating previous mistakes and the enhancement of past technologies. On the other hand, some people argue that other fields such as Science and Technology play a more major part in our lives in a way which we need to explore alternative options.
There are many valuable lessons that can be learned from History. One of them is learning from past mistakes and try to avoid them in the future. For instance, nowadays, most countries do not want to initiate a war because they know the negative consequences from past experiences. Another benefit of studying History is that scientists and inventors do not need to reinvent the wheel again. Building upon past inventions an upgrading them could accelerate the process of advancement in technology.
Conversely, it is not possible to learn everything from the past. Exploration is the key to find unanswered questions. Plus, focusing only on the past, does not let us flourish and enhance our lifestyle. Studying new options and possibilities is necessary to move forward. For example, if scientists have not done experiments, we would not have useful medicine to cure illnesses.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that we can benefit from both of these subjects. Learning from past mistakes with the aid of History and looking for new options by following Science is going to help mankind to overcome obstacles in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...hey know the negative consequences from past experiences. Another benefit of studying History is...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ve useful medicine to cure illnesses. In conclusion, there is no doubt that we...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, look, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1277.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.108 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84389591933 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7564474923 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099402831055 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307239235096 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433424019954 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638282660069 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498715956288 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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