Too much emphasis is placed on testing these days. The need to prepare for tests and examinations is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?
Exams and testing play a detrimental role in our educational lives. Undeniably, it has a strong influence on the person we will be in the future, and its impact is often negative. Although we might like not to admit it, tests and exams have created inevitable unpleasant consequences for students. The present essay aims to discuss that the pressure caused by exams is destructive for at least three main reasons.
First and foremost, the pressure of exams can be very harmful to almost all the pupils and their families.
For one thing, being in a permanent state of stress can alter the students' personality and may lead to many worse consequences. For instance, they increase their study time and cut other activities, including sleeping and eating. Another thing is that sometimes this stress may affect other members of the students' families. As an illustration, during exam season, the family's activity reduces to minimum and conflict and tensions rise very fast.
Second, it is often suggested that the pressure of exams and tests can decrease students' potential and enthusiasm. In the first place, good grades are overvalued by teachers, principles, and governments. An example may help clarify the point. In many developing countries, including Iran, They share a view that having good grades is a necessary condition for having a better future. In the second place, on some levels, parents drummed up their expectations from their children. As things stand right now, they need to take the initiative and begin to make an about-face in deciding how to treat with their children.
Last but not least, the pressure of exams and tests seems to entail many problems for teachers and students. Firstly, Doctor Riley, the well-versed head of the psychiatry department of Sidney University, believes that everything hinges on our point of view. Nowadays, the primary purpose of almost all pupils become scoring good grades instead of learning something valuable and useful, and it is the colossal failure of our educational system. Secondly, As has been frequently demonstrated, tests must have some quality, and many teachers do not have the skills and professionalism to prepare a precise exam with fair questions. In other words, the pressure of exams may cause a myriad of arguments for both teachers and students.
To sum up, it can be stated that the pressure of tests and exams are useless. Nevertheless, the question is: Can we solve this problem in general? Only time will tell, but in the meantime, this pressure will continue to damage pupils' health and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...permanent state of stress can alter the students personality and may lead to many worse ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, thus, well, another thing, at least, for instance, in general, for one thing, in other words, to sum up, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2166.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 423.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12056737589 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74827956939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548463356974 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 661.5 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5208086489 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1739130435 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13043478261 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158920916456 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469476463551 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423567221613 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799139082247 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399724511885 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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