Dear Mr.Kim.
This is Hyomin LEE, who met you at plane No.733 last week. I hope you enjoy your flight well.
I am writing to inquire about the job occupation you suggested to me on the trip.
The restaurant you own is really interesting to me,( since I do not work at the moment).
As I remember right, I will visit your shop in Uljin street next Monday that you return from your trip.
As for the position of the restaurant, it would be grateful to me working as an accountant.
(So if I had to choose, I would like to be the chef. however, if you already have chefs I would not have problem to work as a waiter)
There are two reasons that I apply for the position and try to show you the qualification.
first, I graduated from the department of accounting at Busan university as a scholarship student.
Second, I had a short work experience in the other restaurant as an apprentice.
For the reasons, I think I will be suitable for this job.
Should you require more information, please feel free to call me at 0108587621.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Hyomin LEE.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Kim
Dear Mr.Kim. This is Hyomin LEE, who met you at ...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...to choose, I would like to be the chef. however, if you already have chefs I would not ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...and try to show you the qualification. first, I graduated from the department of acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, second, so, well, as for, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50738916256 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67158621496 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.36748438 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.3571428571 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.29896907216 279% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220226316108 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725799259326 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060894467514 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819386822179 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634023051119 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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