Nowadays, following the increasing population of the cities, the accommodation area is required for them. But there is a limited area in the city, the buildings are constructed in the suburb. This phenomenon becomes an issue for people who argue to protect the countryside. In my opinion, protecting the countryside is more important than constructing new buildings.
One of the reasons for protecting the countryside is the natural resources like water, air and foods come from the suburb. Due to construction and residence, the probability of pollution of important resource can increase. If some of them damaged, all of the people in both suburb and city are suffered.
Second, there are other ways to enlarge the housing. Contemporary technology can build skyscraper as well as underground facility. For instance, a building becomes too old to live, it is possible to rebuild the building higher and deeper.
However, building a new home in the countryside also has a good point. People in a city who has a psychological problem or bad condition need someplace to rest with the peaceful circumstance of countryside. It is not far from the city, so they can hurry when the emergency situation occurs to them. But we can expect there will be a side effect with the rapid increase in countryside building.
As has been demonstrated, I can understand why we need countryside housing, but it seems to me that we need to protect the countryside from the longterm perspective.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... can increase. If some of them damaged, all of the people in both suburb and city are suff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0737704918 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11122535228 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577868852459 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8004975078 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.5333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293251768617 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911802539115 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770969987 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144168770921 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704681639689 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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