Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
It is common for a student in abroad to work for a year prior to university. Now this trend has started in India too and many students prefer to join a job before embarking on a formal qualification. In my opinion, there are several benefits of getting a break for a year after finishing schooling and I am going to describe in this essay.
Firstly, this decision not only make a pupil independent but also open their mind to a new world such as having responsibility at work, managing finances, and learning new things at work place. Having spent a year in Canada prior to university, I learnt how to look for work, become responsible with finances and essential life skills such as cooking. Besides, this also helps them to choose a course for higher studies as per the global requirement.
Secondly, practical experience is very important to understand what have been learnt in theoretical part. In addition, it also an opportunity to experiment with different jobs before choosing a career at university.
In fact, most of the companies prefer to get a trained person having basic knowledge of work profile instead of offering a job to a fresher. Therefore, it is an additional qualification to grab an opportunity after finishing studies.
To conclude, working before entering the university has several advantages, which are not only economically viable but also worth in gaining knowledge. Every student should opt working prior to university. Times should be spent wisely as it can never be recuperated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05533596838 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96328304678 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9654679467 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150717484766 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548307127986 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466292891779 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759882212141 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445817641213 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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