As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
With accord to statement,It is firmly true that technology is bringing myriad changes and it also helps a people to mitigate with solution.As a result,masses are becoming more dependent on technology. Unfortunately,people's thinking ability for their self will badly affect.I strongly believe that technology has both pron and cons.
to embark on with statement,as technology solve problems,people do not give stress to their mind to mitigate solution.these will have bad impact on their mind specially childrens. For example,students mostly take a help of internet to solve their query rather than solve it by themeselves. These will have detrimental effects on their mind.they will lost their critical thinking ability. Furthermore,people are becoming more dependent on technology.In future they may not be survive without technology.It causes some health related issues like heart diseases,depression,anxiety etc. Additonly,suicide cases are rising day by day.For instance,young generation are more addicted to video games.Some video games are badly influences their mind and leads them towards death.
on another side,there are compelling advantages of technology,nowadays each and every problems solutions are easily available on internet so that, rather than finding a solution by itself people take internet help.Fortunately,they are able to save their lots of time.For instance,google maps is one of the application which help peoples to find routes and it is also help to find data about traffic and alternative routs.so basically,peoples are able to reach at their destination without anybody help as well as they can save their time.
To be continue with these,technology saves money as well as energy.Gone days are those, when people had to done most of the work manually,but technology brings dramatic changes.One clear example is,online transaction which person can do from one place to anywhere.these will saves time,money and lots of effort of people.Furthermore,with strong network of technology,people can stay connected with their family and friends.Skype,Facebook,whats app are application to stay connected with world.
Agglomerating all the points elaborated above,it can be concluded that technology has both best as well as worst effects.Technology can develop people mind but it is depend on use of technology.It also help to improve people ability to think if people use it as mind exercise and it can also stop people mind if they heavily depend on technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.73924731183 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.01195876098 2.79657885939 143% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559139784946 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.556143304 60.3974514979 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.5 118.986275619 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 49.0 7.80617977528 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202553834233 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989130917371 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387015650739 0.0758088955206 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126947426671 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605715108501 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.1392134831 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.0 48.8420337079 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.1639044944 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.