You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr and Mrs Anderson,
My name is Tolegen Ami, but my friends usually call me Tolik, so, please, feel free to use this nickname as well. Two weeks ago, Mrs Ami and I moved into your neighborhood from Vostok-1 district. I would like to inform you in this letter that my family is arranging a gathering to celebrate this event. However, my wife thinks that I should make you aware of the probable noise.
My household is organizing a large party this weekend, since according to my culture, we are supposed to invite more than one hundred people. I intend to employ both singers and dancers to amuse the guests. This means that there will be much disturbing noise, for example, load music and the roaring of cars. Besides, I am sure that there will be numerous vehicles in the street. They will be quite noisy.
My mother suggested me to ask both you and your spouse to come to the celebration as a form of compensation. Hence, I would be delighted, if you accepted my invitation. You will certainly enjoy it, as there will be a great deal of dishes as well as entertainment.
I look forward to your reply as soon as possible, because we need to know the exact number of visitors.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, if, look, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1018.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64840182648 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5666893717 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643835616438 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6240007592 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7142857143 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153013349187 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612271054121 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695332035458 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0709092799459 0.12726935374 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523769670831 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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