A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
In this letter, I am writing to say that I agree to visit Canada next month, but I have never been to it. I would, therefore, like to ask some information relating to the country prior to my departure.
Your advice on what your parents prefer would be helpful. I am concerned of what to bring to them as a present, because I am unaware of what is in popularity in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for example, a furry camel, chess and books with complete description of Karaganda city. It would, hence, be nice, if you help me with it.
It would be useful to know what type of clothing to include in my luggage. Unfortunately, I can easily get illness, such as flu and a cold, if I do not wear inappropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me regarding to usual garment in Toronto.
Traditional food in your region is also essential to me. I have already heard that the cousin in your motherland is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. It is important to me, since I have an allergy to milk-made dishes, that may have a detrimental impact on me.
In conclusion, I am looking forward to your reply, as it is a necessity for me to make some preparations before my flight. You can either send me your response to my email address “tolikxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number “87001444413”.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73790322581 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38544506578 2.54303337028 133% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600806451613 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 290.88556701 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3295997909 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 4.34317383033 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167658512541 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528391826988 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386074743663 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887987331863 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02202588151 0.0580467560999 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.