Adolescence is considered to be the most sensitive stage of life. Considering this, there is an opinion that teenagers face a range of social issues because parents do not dedicate quality time to their children at this stage. However, I disagree with this viewpoint as a teenager's thinking can lead to social menace and if parents love spending time with them then their priorities may vary.
The most obvious reason why parents are not responsible is that a sense of independence arises at such a stage. Keeping this in retrospect, they find various employment sources, and if teenagers can find a suitable job, they would become self-sufficient. Therefore, they are more likely to purchase own car, clothes, and gadgets. Being dependent, they do not consider parents for the most valuable decisions. In the long run, they may repent owing to poor decision making power. Eminent Psychologists have revealed that children who become self-dependent at the age of 13 to 19 years are usually suffered emotional sickness due to wrong decisions taken by them.
Although some parents can spend enough time with their teens, their young ones prefer friends over parents. Since children heavily rely on technology, it becomes really easy making friends on social media such as Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook. When they make friends socially, they would love visiting them for some time and may suffer breakups in the long term. Thence, depression would become part of their lives. For example, according to a recent survey in 'Times Magazine,' it has proved that most of the children in the teenage years in Canada have been suffering from cognitive ailments: social isolation, alienation, and depression.
To sum up, even though parents have a significant role in nourishing the children, some teens are responsible for the social problems they have been facing on their own because of their priorities as well as self-obsessed nature.
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- The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- These days people in some countries are living in a “throw-away” society, which means people use things in a short time and then throw them away. Causes and problems. 89
- Most people take interviews to elect a person for job. What are the other ways? What do you think is the best way to recruiters new employees? 78
- Nowadays children have a lot of homework to do Some people however believe that less homework means less stress for children so they will be able to learn other useful skills Do you agree or disagree Sample answer Misnariah 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19488817891 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74550406429 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2277501736 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260364938979 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853826748769 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842627373745 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171672999844 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871538761318 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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