Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Author is giving the subtle and firm statment that the inoculations should not be permited against cow flu the wary reason being the small possibility of the death becuase of it.
There are many loop-holes in the stated verdict. Author states that "Inoculations should not be performed due to mere death possibility" but has ignored the vast perspective that what if the saving rate is high than the mortality rate,then wholesome people will be saved, because of a slight possibility of the death why should the life of 100's be kept in danger. Although the cow flu is infectious so in the way there life is in danger so inoculation can become a ray of hope for the infected youth.
The author clamis to examine all the people in the area infected by the cow flu but it a infection so all the areas not only the afffected areas must be examined, or else the mortality rate will increase in the other areas.Often the flu's spread in endemic but it manifold with time.
There might be certain traits in the body that reacts opposite to the treatment and thus possibility of death increases, though it might be the case that it is present in only few then why should the rest be suffering. A study is required to state the author's firm fact.
Author also ignored the fact that the cow must be treated instead of the people of the community. It is like " single rotten apple, rotens all apple" meaning the a single affected cow can widespread the disease and thus the cow must be treated. Certain mesaures must be taken to enlighten the above fact.
Aggregating the uncovered facts it came to notice that the inoculations must be performed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , then
...ing rate is high than the mortality rate,then wholesome people will be saved, because...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...the area infected by the cow flu but it a infection so all the areas not only the...
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Line 9, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Often
...y rate will increase in the other areas.Often the flus spread in endemic but it manif...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'manifolds'?
Suggestion: manifolds
...Often the flus spread in endemic but it manifold with time. There might be certain ...
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Line 17, column 169, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...n apple, rotens all apple' meaning the a single affected cow can widespread the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75342465753 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70360607934 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510273972603 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.5564829388 60.3974514979 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.181818182 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5454545455 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247458765727 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910222789207 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544203816681 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132268786277 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418438103838 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.