Some people believe that uniform should be made compulsory part of the workplace, some disagree, discuss both view and give your opinion.
Many leaders are debating the pros and cons of a mandatory dress code in the workplace. Although, while some people believe that workplace outfit should not be made compulsory, I agree with those who argue that uniform is a critical part of the workplace culture. This essay will explain both sides of the arguments in detail.
One of the crucial downsides of making uniform compulsory is its impact on the employees’ performance. This is because of the over experimented uniform structure that can cause serious problems to the person wearing it. For instance, a woman who is working as an air hostess may develop the physical problems of cramped legs, heel aches and exposure to cold due to their compulsory dress-code of skirts and high heel footwears. Consequently, dress codes like these can affect the health of employees and their efficiency towards work.
Nevertheless, it is vital for companies to mandate employees' dress code to promote a safe and secure working environment. For instance, if the dress code of firefighters and construction workers are not made compulsory, then it may lead to fatal accidents. The reason for this is that uniforms of such people are quality tested and approved by health and safety departments, which provides the first level of safety from potential life-threatening injuries. Conversely, if companies allow people to wear clothes as per their liking, then there will be a shortage of such workers in our lives.
In conclusion, although uniform mandate provides the negatives of declining productivity, I feel that uniform is essential for the injury-prone industries to promote the work culture of safety and security.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2750929368 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98232564426 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587360594796 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3365556433 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168229565226 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558955658177 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688024856623 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105632437298 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865249411626 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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