Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.

Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that these days online shopping is becoming very popular. However the question: do the advantages of general online shopping outweigh the disadvantages? Is considered one of the most controversial issues today. In this essay, I am going to discuss this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

On one side of the argument there are people who argued that the benefits considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is having a reachable, easy to deliver items from all around the world is a great invention that made our lives easier. Transportation and mall’s crowed are most hated problems facing women especially. So buying the exact product when you at home instead of being with people’s crowed is far more comfortable. Moreover it is possible to say that websites are competing with each other’s to catch the buyer attention, for that they are making a fascinating sales that could reach up to 70% which we rarely see in the store except twice a year.

On the other hand, it is also possible to consider it with the opposing case. It is often argued that in fact some websites are selling a cheap quality items with a price that doesn’t worth the product itself. Unfortunately we cannot differentiate the quality unless we have the material by our hand.

In my experience through years of dealing with different websites, despite exposing to fraud, having a missing item in my order, I even had experience ordering a liquid cream in a glass bottle and it came broken. Nevertheless I will keep ordering online because I also had so many good deals.

As we have seen, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however I tend to believe that choosing trusted websites who offer great deals is worth the risk

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...'s crowed is far more comfortable. Moreover it is possible to say that websites are...
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Line 5, column 153, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'item'?
Suggestion: item
...me websites are selling a cheap quality items with a price that doesn't worth th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...m in a glass bottle and it came broken. Nevertheless I will keep ordering online because I a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, in fact, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93708609272 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83183059273 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609271523179 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1743444775 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1875 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112949644547 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0385378200581 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618828301721 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597732626123 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798748422787 0.056905535591 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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