Music can bring people to
It is almost impossible to find a person who does not like music. Music has numerous benefits, both psychological and social. Although it may sound strange, but music has the ability to bring people of different ages and cultures under a single umbrella, whether it is through live music or recordings, or anything else.
A particular genre of music have fans who fall into different age groups and cultures. Despite these differences among them, there is one thing that is common to all of them, that is the music. People who share the music taste can very easily come across one another, through direct interaction or virtually. Now a days social media is a great platform for musicians and music lovers, where they can share their music and opinions about them. And through this interaction they get to know each other and their cultures. These in turn bring them together.
There are numerous concerts going on all over the world, which present great opportunities for music lovers to get together and know about each other. No matter how old they are, sharing the same taste and feeling matter the most in the world of music.
At modern times, music is not only within the boundaries of a particular culture or a country, but spreads all over the world. Through modern technology, music has been able to break the barrier of culture and have a place among people from various different cultures. For example, western music has been popular not only in the US but also the whole world. And musics from other cultures have also started to follow the path of western music. This is an indication of bringing people together through music.
So to conclude, music has the enchanting power to bring people close, no matter their age or culture. Music can be seen as a mean to establish global solidarity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...hrough direct interaction or virtually. Now a days social media is a great platform for mu...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...gh direct interaction or virtually. Now a days social media is a great platform for mu...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81730769231 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40817558843 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528846153846 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.281123866 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457902297821 0.244688304435 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150612304193 0.084324248473 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960524288882 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279211291448 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103025439933 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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