Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pullution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pullution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
what other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays a wide varity of car manufactures have build millions of corporation all around the world as well.Electrical cars are the next genaration which have expanded so quichly.So the cost of petrol is not just reasion for trafic jam.In consequent ,I will improve
Firstly,as you know cars like other technology improve suddenly to new unbelivable fuel like electricity.Electricity is a kind of clean and green feul whole the world.Hybrid cars charge with elctricity in parking of every bodys house.In additional,The factories have special conditions for customers to buy their products easily.As result ,people tend to have hybrid one instead of old fashion.
On the other hands,in our country cost of fuel has side effect on the other things that people need evey day .for instance dairy pruducts,bread and even transportation will be increased dramaticlly.As I had increased cost of fuel most of necessary rutin stuff became expencive.For example the price of bread was duplicated.Workers,employee and other poor people couldn’t pass of This worse moment which they are the real victim.
In conclusion,the cost of fuel don’t solve the problem of trafic jam but also it will be coused of lots of real issue as I said.Education and change the technology of build the cars also difficalt and time consuming but it’s work in long peroud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45161290323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.45775004588 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657258064516 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 228.029786066 49.4020404114 462% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.333333333 106.682146367 211% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.3333333333 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 22.0 7.06120827912 312% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308077091703 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.284581196445 0.084324248473 337% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.238004002452 0.0667982634062 356% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246362955363 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.23944178774 0.056905535591 421% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.9 13.0946893788 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.22 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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