Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pullution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays a wide varity of car manufactures have build millions of corporation all around the world as well.Electrical cars are the next genaration which have expanded so quichly.So the cost of petrol is not just reasion for trafic jam.In consequent ,I will improve
Firstly,as you know cars like other technology improve suddenly to new unbelivable fuel like electricity.Electricity is a kind of clean and green feul whole the world.Hybrid cars charge with elctricity in parking of every bodys house.In additional,The factories have special conditions for customers to buy their products easily.As result ,people tend to have hybrid one instead of old fashion.
On the other hands,in our country cost of fuel has side effect on the other things that people need evey day .for instance dairy pruducts,bread and even transportation will be increased dramaticlly.As I had increased cost of fuel most of necessary rutin stuff became expencive.For example the price of bread was duplicated.Workers,employee and other poor people couldn’t pass of This worse moment which they are the real victim.
In conclusion,the cost of fuel don’t solve the problem of trafic jam but also it will be coused of lots of real issue as I said.Education and change the technology of build the cars also difficalt and time consuming but it’s work in long peroud.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, you know, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36279069767 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.5720203481 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679069767442 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 22.4926829268 316% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.440204916 43.030603864 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.333333333 112.824112599 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.6666666667 22.9334400587 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 44.0 5.23603664747 840% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0796943012569 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519437963194 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276219864328 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.043221224458 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287508803183 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.7 13.2329268293 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -0.59 61.2550243902 -1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 6.51609756098 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 10.3012195122 301% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.49 8.06136585366 143% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 11.4329268293 525% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.9970731707 276% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.0658536585 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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