University experience is more important than a university’s degree. Some people argue that university life is much more important than an educational degree in job market. Do you agree or not agree?
University life is one of the finest phases in everyone's life. Regarding the university experience and degree, people have different views on them. Some people believe that the university experience is much more important than a degree. While other people argue that a degree has more importance than the university's life. This essay will discuss both the points with assisting examples before reaching an appropriate opinion.
The debate surrounding a university life and a degree is the most discussed matter in the era of modernization. First and foremost most people believe that the degree is the mandatory document for getting a job anywhere in the industry. A university degree gives you the identity of the nature of the job. Moreover, it tells us what kind of expertise you have in the current market and related matching profiles should be redirected.
However, an army of people argue that the university experience is more important because of doing a job anywhere it requires talent and talent comes from what you have studied in the last years. Moreover, they also convinced that the degree is just a paper and in real life, it just gives you a job but to survive in the job market we need basic soft skills which come from the university experience.
In conclusion, I am inclined to believe that a degree is more important for the future career because it is a basic identity of yours.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 238.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69470262106 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516806722689 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6377130473 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528714059517 0.242375264174 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.211042062881 0.0925447433944 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.165953356742 0.071462118173 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29011928115 0.151781067708 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153765246188 0.0609392437508 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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