Do you agree that money is the only motivation at work why people prefer working in the same company for many years?
money is one of the thing that we need the most in the world.And those who have it,can survive in this modern world.
I wouldn't say that money is everything,but it is the reason of why we work,which is to receive money.On this essay i would give both of my view about this topic.
Firstly i want to say of why it is so important for gaining money. it is crucial for us to buy our daily bassic needs that is required for us to survive,such as water food,etc. we also can help those who are less fortunate and help them to fulffill their basic needs.this is the main reason why people work for money
On the other hand money can be considered as everything to them so much that they would work overtime and forget to sped time with their loved ones at home.Their bond with their family will also be distrupted because they work constantly for gaining money
Overall i think that money is indeed important,but we as a human have. To remember not to be negatively attached to it and always put ahead family than money
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, so, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45502645503 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44369992556 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 141.462303577 49.4020404114 286% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.333333333 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218301619384 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965147400485 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609382876039 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110092607175 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613175202233 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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