The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken the solve these problems

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...loped a serious issue in both locations.It can increase the number of unemployment...
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...o keep up with the high competitiveness.Furthermore people coming from agricultural areas u...
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...o keep up with the high competitiveness.Furthermore people coming from agricultural areas u...
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...e coming from agricultural areas usualy dont have enough money or dont have a place ...
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...dont have a place to live in the cities.This will cause a number of people lying oon...
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...ple lying oon the street beggaring money,and may discomfort other people. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54651162791 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64974141467 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 86.0 20.2975951904 424% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.141594106 49.4020404114 512% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 477.0 106.682146367 447% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 86.0 20.7667163134 414% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6666666667 7.06120827912 321% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 5.01903807615 618% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298565455012 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.176306636423 0.084324248473 209% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120433549513 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200909693962 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.168529301795 0.056905535591 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.7 13.0946893788 364% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -15.81 50.2224549098 -31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.94 8.58950901804 139% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.4 10.1190380762 360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 37.0 10.7795591182 343% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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