You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organization where you have been working. In your letter
>describe the work you have been doing
>explain why you can no longer do this work
> recommend another person who is interested in the work
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Madam,
my name is maryam azizmohammadi, one of your constant gym members since 2010. Generally, I always delighted for playing badminton in your gym because of the professional coaches, friendly space and so on. But nowadays, I have not found the changing room convenient and clean as well as it was in the past.
I have tried to phone your secretary and informed her the issue. However, unfortunately despite of the fact which I have called her many times for 3 weeks, it seems the situation has not been checked and improved by your staff.
As a loyal member of your gym, I have known responsibility to repeat my demand as far as it will have been done. I would like to know about if you could survey the situation and I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Faithfully yours,
maryam azizmohammadi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y yours, maryam azizmohammadi
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85810810811 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76339786978 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675675675676 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0533076185 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.875 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240093403085 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0877741547671 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615186979443 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120916247821 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921187824334 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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