Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the discrepancies in my account statement that I received earlier today. It has a lot of expenses that do not seem to align with purchase history and I would request you to rectify the bills and resend me the updated one.
I am an account holder in your esteemed bank from the past 4 years and my account details are as follows:
Name: Mustafa Rassawala
• Account no: 2020203040
• credit card no: 4950408228994
let me explain my situation, the items listed in the credit card bill have an additional of 5 items which seem to be purchased by someone who has a child at home ,whereas I am a single person and most of the baby products that are listed are of no use to me. The cost of these items is 500 dollars and it seems to be a huge amount for a student like me.
I would request you to look into this matter with urgency and suggest that you send a revised statement on my email. If any clarification is required I will be more than happy to comply.
Yours faithfully,
Mustafa Rassawala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and my account details are as follows: Name: Mustafa Rassawala • Account no: 2...
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Line 8, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tafa Rassawala • Account no: 2020203040 • credit card no: 4950408228994 let m...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Let
...40 • credit card no: 4950408228994 let me explain my situation, the items list...
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Line 11, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hased by someone who has a child at home ,whereas I am a single person and most of...
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Line 13, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...u send a revised statement on my email. If any clarification is required I will be...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43434343434 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51293967895 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.855895191 44.8134815571 292% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 16.8248392259 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227106697017 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922751570848 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075518532404 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0862942014312 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742506137498 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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