You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.
Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your letter
give the details of the party
the reason why the party was so successful
mention things that helped you a lot/good service provided by the staff of the hotel
Dear Sir,
I am writing to appreciate your efforts for organizing a successful birthday party for my aunt.
The birthday was celebrated on Dec 25th at Grand View Hotel and had a gathering of nearly 100 guests. Although I made the booking at last hour but your staff was kind enough to entertain my request. The party was organized in the beautiful Chelmsford garden near by the roman pond.
Although there were many reasons for the party to be successful but the pivotal reasons were the immaculate preparation by your staff, ambience and quality of the food. The panoramic view of garden decorated with lavender and roses along with the warmth of bonfire provided additional comfort. Additionally the guests appreciated the variety of the cuisines served by your staff. Moreover the joint idea by your staff to serve welcome drinks to the guests was a hit and I am sure many people will follow this gesture at their celebration.
Lastly one of your servers Mr. Tom made sure that everyone was attended. He went an extra mile by making arrangements for hot water and wheel chair for some elderly guests. I am sure without his help this party would not be so successful.
Yours faithfully
Steve
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...ized in the beautiful Chelmsford garden near by the roman pond. Although there we...
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Line 9, column 295, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...of bonfire provided additional comfort. Additionally the guests appreciated the variety of t...
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Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...y of the cuisines served by your staff. Moreover the joint idea by your staff to serve w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90291262136 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5753468039 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.566515084 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1666666667 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315578055951 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105460960588 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800450184006 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203486461337 0.12726935374 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624451441878 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.