Many scientists believe it would be possible to maintain a permanent human presence on Mars or the Moon. On the other hand, conditions on Venus are so extreme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible.
First, atmospheric pressure at Venus’ surface is at least 90 times greater than the pressure at Earth’s surface. This means that a force of 100 kilograms is pressing down on every square centimeter of surface. All spacecraft that have landed on Venus have been crushed by this extreme pressure within an hour of landing. Almost anything humans might land on Venus would be crushed as well.
Second, as far as we know, there are no reservoirs of water on Venus' surface, and the planet's atmosphere, made up mostly of carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid, contains hardly any oxygen or water vapor Water and oxygen would therefore probably have to be supplied to Venus from Earth. The idea of ensuring a regular supply of water and oxygen from Earth is impractical in the extreme and would probably defeat the purpose of establishing a permanent station on Venus.
Third, very little sunlight reaches the planet's surface. About 60 percent of the sunlight that hits Venus is reflected back into space by the thick clouds that fill the atmosphere, which means that only 40 percent of the sunlight can get through the clouds Below these clouds is a dense layer of carbon dioxide, which blocks even more light, so very little light reaches the surface. The lack of light would prevent the use of solar power cells, so humans could not get electricity to power their machines and equipment.
the articles state that venus conditions are very difficult to inhabitant by humans , and provide three reasons for support .however, the professor explains that it could be possible to human presence there and refutes each of the author's reasons.
first, the reading claims that atmospheric pressure on the surface of Venus is much higher than earth's atmosphere and anything will crash on its surface. the professor refutes this point by saying that if they make a floating station above the venus surface which is at least 50 km up the atmospheric pressure will equal that of earth, he states that no crush will occur.
second, the reading posits that there is no reservoir of water and o2 and bring them from earth is impossible.the professor says that there are other chemicals like co2 and sulfuric acid could be used to generate water and o2 .
third , the article says that there is no enough light reach into surface and most of it reflected by clouds, the professor oppses this point by explaining that station will be 50km above so light will reach more and reflected light also may collected and benefit from them in power and electricity .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 1373.03311258 70% => OK
No of words: 196.0 270.72406181 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88775510204 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.04702891845 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45152503556 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 145.348785872 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 419.366225166 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 13.0662251656 38% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 21.2450331126 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5158920783 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 191.6 110.228320801 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2 21.698381199 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6 7.06452816374 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153080981264 0.272083759551 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864722091834 0.0996497079465 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673618468627 0.0662205650399 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095755652997 0.162205337803 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700853074135 0.0443174109184 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 53.8541721854 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.0289183223 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.498013245 168% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.2008830022 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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